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Post by stealthwater on Apr 23, 2007 19:31:49 GMT -5
Name: Rosenpaw
Age: 6 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Moonclan
Rank: Apprentice
Pelt: A beautiful rosen color with ebony tabby stripes, she also has faint gray leopard markings.
Eyes: Gray eyes
Other Appearance: She is long and slender. Her left ear folds over her eye because her ears are very large.
Personality: Excitable, and hyper, she is always eager to learn. she spends her time usually messing around, and is always getting into trouble. Silly at times but can be very serious also. She chases her tail when she's bored (she always has) or bats Goatpaw's ears, depending on her mood which can change quickly.
History: she was born in Moonclan a very weak kit, here ears larger than her litter mates she had hardly any fur. because she was born in leaf bare this was a problem so many thought she wouldn't make it but by new leaf she was lively very lively her fur grew longer but it was still thin. then she caught her fist prey on her first outing out of the nursery it was a sparrow. Her ear folds down now because while she was playing she fell into a stream and hit it on a rock.
Other: Goatpaw, Sparrowpaw, and Burrpaw are her siblings
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Post by ღFoxspiritღ on Apr 24, 2007 16:29:52 GMT -5
Very nice.
I would appreciate it if you would capitalize your letters at the beginning of a sentence though. ^^
And you need to add another sentence to your personality, and add a period to the end of serious please. ^^
Welcome!
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Post by ღFoxspiritღ on Apr 24, 2007 16:47:18 GMT -5
Oh, and add "moons" after her age. ^_^
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Post by stealthwater on Apr 24, 2007 18:43:25 GMT -5
thank you I fixed it
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